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Wednesday, 5 February 2014
Literacy homework: 5th February 2014
Write a letter to the villain in your story, telling him/her
your opinion of their lifestyle and characteristics. Can you use persuasive
techniques to convince them to change their ways?
This homework is due in by Thursday, 6th February.
Dear Little Missy Red, Have you ever considered that by you being extremely violent, there will be serious consequences. When you are violent, you are risking peoples lives. I know a person who can easily tell the police right now because he knows about your disguises, Mr Fox. At our agency, we know everything you have done to hurt people. Mr Fox met you on the train the other day. You might not remember but he had a long nose, he was very hairy and was called Mr Fo.... Mr Folio. NOW do you remember! When you do risk peoples lives, it is like them risking your life. Think very carefully about what you did to Mr Fox or should I say Mr Fox. You wounded him but sadly he past away in hospital! Your fault. Change now because you don't want to be put into jail. Think very carefully Little Missy Red. We do have a prison cell that has just been cleared out, ready for someone.
From THE STOP, THINK, ACT Agency P.S Please change or we are coming for you. P. P. S Write a letter back of confirmation.
Dear Little Blue Bloom I know you have been doing a little killing this week. I would like to say you could do this another way without all of the violents. You no if you do not want to get hurt your self you should get ready to face the things you get for doing this. Please stop being violent!
From the sorting out problems THINK BEFOR YOU ACT service
Dear sir I am writing to you as you lead a dirty cruel lifestyle .Consequently I would like some sound of your voice to analyse. Dirty, horrible , weird life. So please be nice everyone will be happy not angry with you so go on be nice for a change. If your nice not even your wife or children will be angry. so please please please be nice .everyone was begging me to write this letter to you so that you amazilingly friendly.
Hounslow HeathPark, Forest Way Den 108, TWFO X132.
Wednesday 5th Fenuary 2014 Dear Sir Fox, I am terrified to know that you started to eat little children! We know this from Sara Merilka wich is a lawn mower in the park.She saw you trying to eat Little Emerald Cape. You MUST change your ways or you will see the really bad consequences.You may be a wild animal but we are not scared to hunt you down .Even if we don't catch you will starve to death.You have 1 chance to change your ways or you might die.The things that might happen to you if you don't change your ways and we do catch you is we might put you to sleep or we will give you to a zoo or animal reserve.I you harm or bite us we will have to kill you very qiuckly but less painfully.So you MUST change your way's!
From the W.A.P community[Wild Animal Police] P.S.Please change your way's until next month. P.S.We will come and check on you.
This morning at my table having my breakfast I heard on the news that you wolves have been eating SO MANY children everyday! I was shocked when I heard it I fell of my chair. Poor little lily rose she got eaten by you. I heard from my friend called Amy who saw the whole thing she said that little lily rose was skipping till you sneaked behind her at ate the poor girl in one GULP. Amy ran to the animal control and sent this letter to me. So you have 3 days to not eat children. I will let Amy and animal control to spy on you. If I hear one more complain you will be for LUNCH or you will be in the zoo for the rest of your LIFE. Do you understand.
From the A.C ( Animal control) P.S Remember you only have 3 days to change or ELSE P.S I'm coming after 3 days and better to change.
Dear Little Red Assassin, I have heard that you've actually killed a wolf by using a pistol.First of all little girls aren't supposed to carry around a gun with them as it is illegal.Second of all you could've taught the wolf a lesson in a less violent way.I clearly understand that Mr Wolf has devoured your grandmother but if your grandma was alive,do you think that she would've wanted you to kill him?I'm sure not.We could've sent him to a zoo but if necessary a local police station instead you pulled out a revolver and shot him in his forehead 13 times.We will let off this time as you are still a little girl but if this happens again we will have to take action and you'll have to suffer the consequences. Please take this letter into consideration. Yours sincerely The Local Authority
Dear Fox, How dare you threaten the young innocent girl. You don't have any right to do that to a poor girl like Little Red. You will be taken to jail for nay more unnecessary bad behavior . You need to stay healthy and eating beautiful children does not help at all. I think it is disgraceful behavior. You brought out a pistol and was about to shoot her. The little girl was trembling. Did you not notice we had CCTV cameras in the house. Luckily, Red knew you feared chocolate because if not you would have shot her with a revolver. We will see you at court to decide your crimes the consequences. You will have to suffer from it. Yours Faithfully. The Local Authority P.C Seemontini !
You might be thinking why this letter is addressed to you and what it's for. Well, apparently we've heard you've been carrying a revolver, you've been shooting and you've been misusing it. How do you think a little impudent girl going around shooting people, assassinating them , no offence, but you really should 'THINK' before acting.
Once I took a half day off my job and I put on ASC news (Animal Safety Centre) as soon as I came home and heard that a poor little wolf cub was in hospital with an injury on his leg. Good thing he survived, we really do our job well, it's sad that some people don't mercy on animals, some people like you, Little Red.
You have to change your ways, this is your first and last warning. Write back to me if you've decided. Yours sincerely, Yatharth (ASC Group)
Dear Mr Rifle, Recently, I had come upon one of the majour disasters you have created. I must say, the whole area looked like there had been a fight between the Hulk and Spider-Man! There were so many, half-ripped open, bodies scattered around. Debris from broken buildings were simply just chucked everywhere. Can you remember who did this?... You!! I mean,how could you even think about doing this? Everyone I tell seem to cough and rag just hearing it;but you actually conducted the whole thing. Did you even register to your mind, that you could have killed many innocent people. Thousands of lives have just been swept away; but this time, not forgotten about. If they had died normally, like of old age, nobody would be on your case.But to think that children, as old as one or two have been killed, is horrendous. Simply a frightening glimpse of the future, if this doesn't change. You must think that out there, in this civillised world, assasinating people is the right thing to do. All I can say is that it is simply wrong. Just to tell you, it is not only me who is deciding that this thing, and other mischevious things you have done, is wrong. Thousands, probably millions, of people share the same opinions that I have. I should state down that writing these words probably been the hardest thing to do in my life.It is very hard for villain to listen to a common man's words. So please take into consideration and STOP EVIL RISING!
Yours sincerely, Head of A.V.L ( ANTI VILLAIN LEAGUE )
Dear Little Missy Red,
ReplyDeleteHave you ever considered that by you being extremely violent, there will be serious consequences. When you are violent, you are risking peoples lives. I know a person who can easily tell the police right now because he knows about your disguises, Mr Fox. At our agency, we know everything you have done to hurt people. Mr Fox met you on the train the other day. You might not remember but he had a long nose, he was very hairy and was called Mr Fo.... Mr Folio. NOW do you remember! When you do risk peoples lives, it is like them risking your life. Think very carefully about what you did to Mr Fox or should I say Mr Fox. You wounded him but sadly he past away in hospital! Your fault. Change now because you don't want to be put into jail. Think very carefully Little Missy Red. We do have a prison cell that has just been cleared out, ready for someone.
From THE STOP, THINK, ACT Agency
P.S Please change or we are coming for you.
P. P. S Write a letter back of confirmation.
Thank You xxx
Dear Little Blue Bloom
ReplyDeleteI know you have been doing a little killing this week.
I would like to say you could do this another way without all of the violents.
You no if you do not want to get hurt your self you should get ready to face the things you get for doing this.
Please stop being violent!
From the sorting out problems
THINK BEFOR YOU ACT service
I decided to domineering on paper but I think Diya has included powerful verbs and lots of adjectives !
ReplyDeleteThank you Aidan.
DeleteDear sir
ReplyDeleteI am writing to you as you lead a dirty cruel lifestyle .Consequently I would like some sound of your voice to analyse. Dirty, horrible , weird life. So please be nice everyone will be happy not angry with you so go on be nice for a change. If your nice not even your wife or children will be angry. so please please please be nice .everyone was begging me to write this letter to you so that you amazilingly friendly.
Hounslow HeathPark,
ReplyDeleteForest Way Den 108,
TWFO X132.
Wednesday 5th Fenuary 2014
Dear Sir Fox,
I am terrified to know that you started to eat little children! We know this from Sara Merilka wich is a lawn mower in the park.She saw you trying to eat Little Emerald Cape. You MUST change your ways or you will see the really bad consequences.You may be a wild animal but we are not scared to hunt you down .Even if we don't catch you will starve to death.You have 1 chance to change your ways or you might die.The things that might happen to you if you don't change your ways and we do catch you is we might put you to sleep or we will give you to a zoo or animal reserve.I you harm or bite us we will have to kill you very qiuckly but less painfully.So you MUST change your way's!
From the W.A.P community[Wild Animal Police]
P.S.Please change your way's until next month.
P.S.We will come and check on you.
Dear Mr.Wolf
ReplyDeleteThis morning at my table having my breakfast I heard on the news that you wolves have been eating SO MANY children everyday! I was shocked when I heard it I fell of my chair. Poor little lily rose she got eaten by you. I heard from my friend called Amy who saw the whole thing she said that little lily rose was skipping till you sneaked behind her at ate the poor girl in one GULP. Amy ran to the animal control and sent this letter to me. So you have 3 days to not eat children. I will let Amy and animal control to spy on you. If I hear one more complain you will be for LUNCH or you will be in the zoo for the rest of your LIFE. Do you understand.
From the A.C ( Animal control)
P.S Remember you only have 3 days to change or ELSE
P.S I'm coming after 3 days and better to change.
Dear Little Red Assassin,
ReplyDeleteI have heard that you've actually killed a wolf by using a pistol.First of all little girls aren't supposed to carry around a gun with them as it is illegal.Second of all you could've taught the wolf a lesson in a less violent way.I clearly understand that Mr Wolf has devoured your grandmother but if your grandma was alive,do you think that she would've wanted you to kill him?I'm sure not.We could've sent him to a zoo but if necessary a local police station instead you pulled out a revolver and shot him in his forehead 13 times.We will let off this time as you are still a little girl but if this happens again we will have to take action and you'll have to suffer the consequences.
Please take this letter into consideration.
Yours sincerely The Local Authority
Dear Fox,
ReplyDeleteHow dare you threaten the young innocent girl. You don't have any right to do that to a poor girl like Little Red. You will be taken to jail for nay more unnecessary bad behavior . You need to stay healthy and eating beautiful children does not help at all. I think it is disgraceful behavior. You brought out a pistol and was about to shoot her. The little girl was trembling. Did you not notice we had CCTV cameras in the house. Luckily, Red knew you feared chocolate because if not you would have shot her with a revolver. We will see you at court to decide your crimes the consequences. You will have to suffer from it.
Yours Faithfully.
The Local Authority
P.C Seemontini !
To Little Red,
ReplyDeleteYou might be thinking why this letter is addressed to you and what it's for. Well, apparently we've heard you've been carrying a revolver, you've been shooting and you've been misusing it. How do you think a little impudent girl going around shooting people, assassinating them , no offence, but you really should 'THINK' before acting.
Once I took a half day off my job and I put on ASC news (Animal Safety Centre) as soon as I came home and heard that a poor little wolf cub was in hospital with an injury on his leg. Good thing he survived, we really do our job well, it's sad that some people don't mercy on animals, some people like you, Little Red.
You have to change your ways, this is your first and last warning. Write back to me if you've decided.
Yours sincerely,
Yatharth (ASC Group)
Gun Lair
ReplyDeleteEvil Creacent 695
R1FL 3A63
Dear Mr Rifle,
Recently, I had come upon one of the majour disasters you have created. I must say, the whole area looked like there had been a fight between the Hulk and Spider-Man! There were so many, half-ripped open, bodies scattered around. Debris from broken buildings were simply just chucked everywhere. Can you remember who did this?... You!! I mean,how could you even think about doing this? Everyone I tell seem to cough and rag just hearing it;but you actually conducted the whole thing. Did you even register to your mind, that you could have killed many innocent people. Thousands of lives have just been swept away; but this time, not forgotten about. If they had died normally, like of old age, nobody would be on your case.But to think that children, as old as one or two have been killed, is horrendous. Simply a frightening glimpse of the future, if this doesn't change.
You must think that out there, in this civillised world, assasinating people is the right thing to do. All I can say is that it is simply wrong. Just to tell you, it is not only me who is deciding that this thing, and other mischevious things you have done, is wrong. Thousands, probably millions, of people share the same opinions that I have. I should state down that writing these words probably been the hardest thing to do in my life.It is very hard for villain to listen to a common man's words. So please take into consideration and STOP EVIL RISING!
Yours sincerely,
Head of A.V.L
( ANTI VILLAIN LEAGUE )